We worked on our own scenes;
I worked in group one. We decided that we should show the bully off as a stupid person. someone to be seen as ridiculous. We decided because we had two males in our group that we should work as couples. Joe went with Kate. this is when we decided that we could have the other girl being jealous of kate with her boyfriend.We decided that because we wanted the bullies to look like idiots, we decided to make them chavvy and stupid sounding. We also had a scripted bit where i described a lesson where i got sent out for back combing my fringe. this we decided showed more patheticness and idiocy from the bullies. We said all this as we walked down a road. We then went to cross a road that led to a bus stop. I then snigger and say to Abbie "look who's on the other side of the road". Abbie says that she doesn't want to cross the road because she likes Kates boyfriend. I drag her across and then read the Bus timetable in front of them. Already being intimidating. We read out times and bus routes saying places like 'Goes past Whores 'R' us straight to weight watched'. Kate then reacts to it and get down because of it. Then she tells Joe that she's "sick of it!' and that "it happens everyday after school" making the audience sympathies' for her. here is when it stops.
Our feedback was that i shouldn't block the other people at the bus stop. We should make it more intimidating when walking down the street. We should have stronger characters and make it more obvious who we are. we should get Joe and Kate a scene before hand to introduce them to the audience.
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